A few suggestions
bass should be stronger, there should be more to it, and I don't really see this as an indutrial. I see it more as a trance. I like it none the less.
A few suggestions
bass should be stronger, there should be more to it, and I don't really see this as an indutrial. I see it more as a trance. I like it none the less.
Thanks, mabey ill turn it into a full song, but yea your probaly right, i should have put it under trance.
Not to be harsh, but...
I think it was a little fast for a trace. Slow it down some. The rain was a fabulous idea. I thik though that the rain could have been louder. As it is, that's my only problems with it. Everything else is good. Its a wonderful piece, just to fast for what you've called it. But other than that fabulous job. Great work as usual.
Your review is not harsh at all! I actually glad you actually spoke out what your true oppinion is =D.
Anyways i have fooled around with it at different speeds this seems to be the best speed...BUT...maybe in 2008 i will be making a "Rain Trance 2" which can be a little slower and much better =D.
Thanks for the suggestion!
Good song
I can listen to it over and over and not get tired of it. Like the guy below me said, its a bit fast to be trance, but its still good none the less. I would have made the guitar a bit smidge louder and the rest of the song a bit quieter when the guitar was brought out and then gradually raised the volume back up. But I still give it a five out of five, a download, and a trip to my favorite artist list is what this song got you. Oh, and a review of course..
Oh, thank you very much. This means a lot to me, especially it's the first song on FL I've ever tried. I'll take your suggestion to improve my upcoming work. :D
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